Last year smoking in some places in Spain was banned. In a lot of bars and restaurants you can’t smoke and the young people who are under 18 can’t get into these bars or restaurants where smoking is not banned. But more big restaurant have their local divided in two parts, one of them is for people who don’t smoke and everyone can go there but the second part is for people who smoke.
Moreover is banned smoking in public places like hospitals, places of work, shops and so on.
I think this law helps people who don’t smoke stay in a restaurant or bar and they do not have to worry for the smoke of the other people and it is healthier also for the young people or children.
Furthermore I think is good that big restaurants have to parts for everybody so you are free to choose in which part you want to stay.
I don’t know if this law can help people to stop smoking but in this way the rest people who don’t do it could go to several places and be calm about that.
Moreover is banned smoking in public places like hospitals, places of work, shops and so on.
I think this law helps people who don’t smoke stay in a restaurant or bar and they do not have to worry for the smoke of the other people and it is healthier also for the young people or children.
Furthermore I think is good that big restaurants have to parts for everybody so you are free to choose in which part you want to stay.
I don’t know if this law can help people to stop smoking but in this way the rest people who don’t do it could go to several places and be calm about that.
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Your opinion paragraph is pretty good. But, let me comment two mistakes. In English local means "del lloc, del país", and you should have used "site" or "place" instead.
Finally, more health is not correct. It is healthier.
Keep on working like that. Your writing skills in English are improving.
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